For writers with completed rough drafts.

essayists ready for AN injection of new ideas into their work.


 COACHES drafting books to attract premium clients.


Authors in personal growth spheres wishing to enhance credibility.


writers seeking an agent in today's marketplace.


Is your rough draft ready for feedback?

The final step in the writing process ends with a professionally-edited manuscript.

Working with a professional editor:

The competitive edge

Who can benefit from manuscript editing?


Ensures work is polished before submission or publication.

Elevates your idea into art via craft.

Gives your book a competitive edge in today's marketplace.

In an age when it’s easy to publish quickly, it’s more important than ever to publish well.

Most editing services charge separately for line-editing and developmental critique. The Writing Cycle’s signature manuscript service does both. First, I zero in on what your writing ultimately wants to say. My goal is to connect with your voice and center your experience on the page. In critique, I evaluate the quality of your book’s structure and technical elements, providing opportunities for improvement. When editing, I improve the smallest details, ensuring correctness of grammar, mechanics, and punctuation. Finally, I enhance artistry present on the page.

Manuscript Critique + Editing Package :

with me

WHy work

Hi, I'm Carol, a professional editor based in Scottsdale, Arizona. My passion is helping authors of memoir and literary fiction craft compelling narratives, along with assisting professionals in personal growth develop books to enhance brands. I have edited work in these genres published with big houses, small presses, and self-publishers, and understand what readers want. 

While I no longer edit genre fiction, nor trade nonfiction that does not center around a narrative journey, I'm happy to recommend editors who excel in these areas.

There are dozens of editors assisting authors toward publication. Few are MFA-trained, prize-winning artists themselves; fewer still have taught writing workshops at colleges, universities, and conferences for nearly two decades. Likewise, writing groups require you to spend precious time reading and responding to dozens of manuscripts, only to receive varying opinions on your own. When working with me, you receive decisive direction from one person: your editor. And your only job is to take advice that resonates with your vision for your book.

When editing, I play the perfectionist (so you don’t have to), while holding in mind big-picture opportunities for each project. I never take on more than one manuscript per month to ensure I hold exclusive space for your story in my thoughts throughout the time we work together.

My Bio, Testimonials, and Blog should reveal if I’m a fit for you.

Ready to get on my schedule?

Includes: detailed six-page letter of expert developmental feedback, extensive margin notes, line editing for style and correctness, free query or pitch Rx, and a 60-minute virtual consultation.

70,000-100,000 words. (The average published book runs 80,000 words. Reach out regarding manuscripts that fall outside this range.) 


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Includes: expert analysis of craft, detailed two-page critique letter, polishing line-edits and margin notes.

Quick turnaround.


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Maximum 5,000 words. 1 piece per service. No compilations.


Prices are set at industry-standard rates

A 50% retainer is due prior to the start of all book-length services to reserve time in my calendar. The balance is due upon receipt of your edited manuscript and evaluation letter. Full payment is required up front for non book-length works. Please allow up to one month for completion of book-length projects; shorter projects can be turned around more quickly.

Quick Turnaround

Benefits & Bonuses :


Big-Picture Developmental Critique

Line-editing for GMP

Free Query or Pitch

60-min Zoom Consult


Upon approval, pay the deposit above. Email your completed manuscript as a double-spaced Word document in Times New Roman, 12-point font to the secure address I provide.


I will read your manuscript twice, first as a reader, then as an editor. In a six-page critique, I will provide a thorough assessment of its strengths as well as any technical elements in need of improvement.


Upon receipt of your edited manuscript and letter, pay the balance to schedule your one-on-one feedback session. Use Microsoft Word to accept or reject individual changes, and choose whether to incorporate bigger-picture suggestions.


Schedule your one-on-one 60-minute virtual session here. I will answer questions, provide clarification, and brainstorm next steps with you. It is in these sessions the most valuable breakthroughs occur.

how it works

Carol knows how to help writers find and shape the essential in their work. She understands what makes a good story. Her talent for narrative structure shows in her consulting and her own work, which she approaches with intelligence and humor.

— Corey Campbell,  Award-winning short story writer

Carol is a consummate professional and pleasure to work with. Her guidance was extremely insightful in pinpointing areas to develop in my first book. The hallmark of Carol’s approach is character development. Her use of the elements of writing is spot on. Her advice is worth its weight in gold!”

— Isabella Maldonado, Award-winning author of the Vera Cruz series & THE CIPHER, a soon-to-be Netflix feature starring JLo. 

Since we were together at graduate school, I have admired Carol’s craft, her commitment to the life of the mind, and the intelligence of her conversation.

In workshops and afterwards, as she has continued to read my work in draft, I have found her perceptions and comments regarding my work to be razor sharp, delivered with great good will, and cutting to the heart of the matter. Both as a reader and a writer, Carol is exceptional.”

— Daniyal Mueenuddin, National Book Award & Pulitzer Prize Finalist: Other Rooms, Other Wonders

“I came to Carol to critique and edit my novel because she is imaginative, thoughtful, and humane. You can trust your prose to her; she’ll make it better in ways you will understand and enjoy.” 

Sheila Grinell, Author, The Contract & Appetite

Carol is an astute professional editor, current on standard industry formats and knows what agents and publishers are looking for.
I’ve had the pleasure to attend a few of her presentations: she truly motivates writers who have found themselves stuck in the revision process or lost during their quest to publication.”

— Deborah J Ledford, Award-winning Suspense Novelist, including
2014’s Best Audio Book, CRESCENDO, narrated by Christina Cox.




Hi, I'm Carol,

an Arizona-based writing coach and editor who turns ideas into art.


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